Five sentence fiction


Unrelenting love

Lying in bed in the lonely, dark room she looked out the open window into the distance wondering if he was really leaving without saying goodbye. The chill of the breeze hit her uncovered shoulders and face.She got out of bed in her white cotton night dress and walked towards the window to close it. She heard his voice and thought it was her heart playing tricks on her mind. As she turned around there he was, as beautiful as ever standing in her doorway,he wasn’t leaving after all!

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  1. well, I am glad that there is a happy ending to your story - nice work!

    1. Thanks, I grew up reading fairy tales so I love happy endings.:-)

  2. Nice twist at the end!
    Thanks for visiting my blog and leaving a comment!
    Nice to meet you. *waving*


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